Monster Without by Jurij Fedorov | Script Revolution

Monster Without

A teenage girl is haunted by a ghost. One of her classmates sees this not as a problem for her but as a solution to his problems.

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This is my only readable feature script so far. The rest are terrible and not worth your time because they are very experimental. So if you don't understand how I try to break genres you will not understand my other scripts. This one is a 5,5/10 script in my opinion. There is not much character development or clear motivations but the story is there already. So I can make it into a good script down the line. Also, it's the second script I have ever written. This was before I knew what a script even looked like but in redrafts I did translate it to English and changed a few things around.

I love horror movies but unfortunately most of them are just very unrealistic and therefore often bad. The police is never called. People go out to fight the monster by themselves. The monster often both kills but also hides. Creating an extremely unrealistic monster.

So I wanted to fix most of these mistakes by just writing a cheap to make and simple family movie about a REAL ghost. Not that stupid movie stuff. What would actually happen if someone discovered a ghost in a slightly comedic world? Would they run and hide, fight or something else? To me the answer is painfully clear. A ghost is an opportunity. It's something that would change history for everyone for ever. It would be by far the greatest discovery of all time. And getting killed by this ghost would make you world famous.

Submitted: June 15, 2018
Last Updated: December 12, 2018

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so. I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get. Info to directors All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my... Go to bio

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