Controller by B. S. Carter | Script Revolution

Controller

A young fugitive, still traumatized from a high school assault, uses an experimental mind-control device to save a new lover from a jealous techno thief.

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One minute MADI’s getting ready for a romantic night out with JOEL (too gorgeous for his own good). The next, she finds herself stabbing him repeatedly.

When Madi first met Joel, she was homeless, having lived on the streets since a traumatic high school event. After she tries and fails to pick his pocket, Joel takes pity on her and introduces her to his crew: a group of thieves that use mind-control technology.

Madi immediately hits it off with both Joel and crew leader BRIGID, a woman as close to perfect as you get (beautiful, intelligent, stylish, competent). But Brigid doesn’t like to share, and soon grows jealous of Madi and Joel’s escalating relationship. It’s unclear exactly whom she’s more jealous of.

After attacking Joel against her will, Madi evades arrest and goes on the hunt. Armed with only the prototype of the mind-control technology (versus Brigid’s advanced model), Madi sets out to defeat Brigid before she can finish the job with Joel.

Submitted: November 23, 2019
Last Updated: September 30, 2021

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The Writer: B. S. Carter

B. S. Carter began his writing career in second grade writing one-page (wide rule) sequels to movies like The Terminator. B. S. attended the University of South Carolina (the other USC) and graduated with a Liberal Arts degree in Media Arts (concentration Film). While in college, B. S. won the Havilah Babcock Short Story Prize for his short story “Guts,” in which a high schooler tries to stop his best friend from committing suicide. After college, B. S. moved to Los Angeles with his wife. There, for nine years, he wrote, rewrote, smoked, PA-ed for free, PA-ed for money (worked for David Lynch), worked as a reader at production companies, quit smoking, and couldn’t get arrested to save his... Go to bio

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