Two of Father Brown's friends go undercover at a high-class hotel to find the culprit behind a series of grisly murders, using themselves as bait to draw the killer out of the shadows.
Type:
Episode
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
75pp
Genre:
Comedy, Drama, Mystery
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
Everyone
Based On:
The BBC light-comedy murder-mystery series Father Brown
Synopsis/Details
This is the fourth of five spec-scripts that I have recently written for the BBC comedy-drama murder-mystery show "Father Brown", and this one in particular has a bit more emphasis on the comedy with the Beatrice & Benedick-ish/screwball comic-bickering element that I've added in as my own personal touch with the new substory arc that I came up with for these specs. I have written these with to use a showcase/calling card for my tv screenwriting talent with the intention of trying to find representation in the UK as well as to hopefully get the attention of the BBC Writer's Room and the producers of the Father Brown series itself, as I am determined to become a regular contributing writer for the show. This is why I use the British spellings of various words which differ from the way they're spelled in American English, and I also use various idioms that are very specific to the UK and not as familiar to US audiences, but this is to demonstrate that my writing is very British in style and tone and my familiarity with the show itself, since I also do a number of callbacks and references in my specs to previously produced episodes of the show. Though I do use the regular cast of characters established on the show, I also introduce my own original guest characters in my specs as well as new story beats/character arcs for the regular characters that continue to evolve throughout my specs in chronological order to demonstrate my ability to continue the world-building detail and character evolution that they've done on the show. I've included "previously on" pages on all of my Father Brown specs in order to make it easier for any reader unfamiliar with the show, or if they hadn't read my previous specs yet, to understand some of the story developments. So far all of the writers/readers who've looked at my specs have told me that they read/sound just like an actual episode of the show itself, so I'd like to think that's a good sign that I can actually use these to get the attention of the Father Brown producers/story editor for their consideration.
All Accolades & Coverage

This just won Top Finalist accolades for Scriptapalooza's 2022 TV Writing Competition (the same tv writing comp that my 2nd Father Brown script, "The Wrong Scone", won last year in 2021), which also pushed up its rating with Coverfly to the Top 11% of Discoverable Projects on that website (top 25% overall). Beta-readers who are UK writers/actors/creatives have told me that these specs sound so "authentically British" that they wouldn't even know I was American if I didn't tell them; they also tell me that my specs sound just like actual episodes of the show & they would love to see them made into actual episodes! I've been told that this one especially, "The Belle of the Bonfire", is my best one of the batch yet!

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The Writer: Karen Simmons

I have worked as both a Production Assistant and Story Assistant on various television show productions, while also working on my own tv spec scripts over the years. I've also been ghost-writing for my husband, Eddie Pepitone, who is a stand-up comedian/actor, having written many jokes, online videos, sketches, co-written on his one-man stage shows, and wrote an award-winning mockumentary short film that he starred in called "Runyon: Just Above Sunset" (which won Best in Show at the L.A. "Mockfest" film festival in 2011, among other awards). I was part of a writer's room for the David Feldman Comedy podcast (a sort of cross between "SCTV" and Garrison Keillor's "Prairie Home Companion") for… Go to bio
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