Unable to sleep, a lonely, embittered old man spends the early hours of the morning drinking brandy and reminiscing on his life. The actions of which, ultimately, call time on his earthly existence.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
16pp
Genre:
Drama
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
In an old Edwardian house during a stormy night, Ralph, a lonely 80-year-old man, finds himself unable to sleep. Haunted by regrets and memories, he reflects on his deteriorating health and his estranged relationship with his daughter, Belinda. Wandering through the house, he immerses himself in memories of his late wife, Rosemary, whose photograph he still cherishes. Ralph blames Rosemary's death during childbirth on their daughter, causing him a lifetime of guilt and solitude. Unable to sleep, he goes downstairs, mournfully recalling a past filled with loss and opportunities missed. He attempts to numb his pain with brandy, blending it into his cocoa. He resigns to writing a heartfelt letter to his deceased wife, expressing his regret and longing. However, in his despair, he spills the brandy over the letter, smudging his words and deepening his belief that he will never be forgiven or understood, even in death. Ralph's broken heart and mind are mirrored in the crumbling ambience of his home. He falls asleep, only to be interrupted by the grandfather clock chiming. He awakens, coughs, and fills the emptiness with sips of brandy, ruminating on his failures and solitude. He dreams of being reunited with his wife and wishes for peace in the afterlife. The imbibed brandy soon takes effect and Ralph falls asleep. The chiming of the grandfather clock wakens him and he shuffles his way back upstairs and to bed, where he falls asleep almost instantly. As dawn approaches, a breeze causes an ember to fly from the fire, igniting scattered newspapers and consuming the old house in flames. Unaware and asleep, Ralph is enveloped by smoke from the fire, finally providing him relief from his tormented life. A couple of hours later, fire engines line the street outside the charred remains of the house. Betty, Ralph's housemaid, arrives and learns of his tragic fate. The Chief Firefighter enters the charred remains of the sitting room. Curiously, the grandfather clock in the corner is still ticking away. It chimes for eight o'clock. On the floor, miraculously preserved amid the devastation, is Ralph's letter. He picks it up and reads it out loud. The letter is rife with remorse and yearning for reconciliation with his daughter. It expresses Ralph's acceptance of his actions and his wish to be reunited with Rosemary. The letter highlights Ralph's acknowledgement of his self-inflicted misery and his longing for redemption. As the firefighter finishes reading, he notices that the grandfather clock has permanently stopped. Time, for Ralph, has finally ceased, bringing an end to his story of regret and unfulfilled desires.

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The Writer: Elliot Stanton

I am a writer of many short and super-short screenplays, and I have won over 250 awards from Film Festivals and competitions worldwide. I have completed a paid commission to write a screenplay for a feature film. Most recently, I have finished my first self-written full-length feature screenplay. In addition, I have written a total of nine books - five novels, a book of short stories, and three books of poetry. Go to bio
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