A high school romance turns into an abusive marriage that escalates to murder, leading to vigilante justice.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
45pp
Genre:
Drama
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details
The Promise of Love In high school, Monica is a focused, intelligent student with a sharp wit and a guarded heart. She’s content in her own world, uninterested in the superficial allure of prom or the attention of her classmates—until Craig, the charming basketball star, steps in to protect her from the predatory advances of Jason, a classmate with sinister intentions. Craig’s kindness and respect stand in stark contrast to the crass behavior of the boys around her, and Monica finds herself drawn to him. Their connection is instant, built on mutual respect and the promise of something real. But beneath Craig’s gentlemanly facade lies a painful past. Raised by an alcoholic father who abuses his mother, Craig vows never to become like him. His determination to break the cycle of violence is what initially endears him to Monica. When he asks her out, it feels like the beginning of a love story that could defy the odds. The Descent into Darkness After high school, Monica and Craig’s relationship deepens. They marry, and for a while, their love seems unshakable. But when Craig’s dreams of playing in the NBA are shattered due to an injury sustained while protecting Monica, his frustration and resentment begin to fester. The man who once vowed to never raise a hand in anger starts to change. Small arguments turn into explosive fights. Criticisms become cruel insults. And one fateful night, after a heated confrontation, Craig shoves Monica down the stairs, causing her to miscarry their first child. The line between love and abuse blurs. Monica, desperate to hold onto the man she fell in love with, convinces herself that Craig’s violence is a result of stress, regret, and his own unhealed trauma. She rationalizes his behavior, believing that if she tries harder—if she’s a better wife—she can bring back the man he used to be. But Craig’s apologies are empty, his promises hollow. His abuse escalates, fueled by alcohol, jealousy, and his own insecurities. Each beating leaves Monica more broken, both physically and emotionally, yet she stays, trapped by fear, love, and the hope that things will change. The Illusion of Redemption Craig’s infidelity is the final betrayal. When Monica confronts him, he doesn’t deny it. Instead, he taunts her, his cruelty laying bare the truth: the man she loved is gone. In a moment of defiance, Monica finally finds the strength to leave. But Craig, unable to accept her rejection, lashes out one last time. In a fit of rage, he strikes her with enough force to break her neck, killing her instantly. The tragedy of Monica’s death is not just the loss of her life, but the realization of how deeply she was deceived. Craig’s final act of violence exposes the brutal truth: his love was never about her. It was about control, possession, and his own twisted sense of pride. The Reckoning Monica’s death is not the end of the story—it’s the catalyst for justice. Deena, Monica’s fiercely loyal best friend and a survivor of her own abusive relationship, refuses to let Craig’s crime go unpunished. Armed with a gun and a resolve hardened by her own pain, Deena confronts Craig in a bar, the same place where he once drowned his guilt in alcohol. With cold precision, she forces him to face the consequences of his actions. As she pulls the trigger, Deena delivers the final verdict: some sins are beyond forgiveness.

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The Writer: Bernard Mersier

Born and raised in Detroit, Michigan. Some of my work that's been produced include two stage plays. "The same woman in me." "Family abuse" which is also part of an anthology I've written titled "Mirrors with no images." The feature film I have in production is titled "The heartbreaker.” Go to bio
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