When a high-strung mother comes to the horrible realization that her future son-in-law is the son of her cocky, cheating ex-husband, she's forced to make peace with her past to prevent wedding turmoil.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
106pp
Genre:
Comedy, Drama, Romance
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
  • Stage 32 - Recommended
Synopsis/Details
NUTSHELL: TICKET TO PARADISE meets THE BIG WEDDING OVERVIEW: Set in Chicago, PARALLEL PROPOSALS is a fun, grounded ensemble script that centers on four intertwined/multi-generational couples at different stages of life — from a young, newly engaged couple to second acts and fourth chances. The protagonist is the bride's mother, who struggles to come to terms with having her ex-husband back in her life. PARALLEL PROPOSALS explores themes of atonement, forgiveness, personal growth and new beginnings. Despite initial torment and irksome shenanigans, a rankled mother finds that an open mind and heart lead to internal peace, a cordial relationship with her ex-husband and a joyful wedding for her daughter. People can change — even that schmuck of an ex-husband! PITCH DECK AVAILABLE UPON REQUEST. SYNOPSIS: Set in modern-day suburban Chicago, ELLEN (56) and NEIL (57) SPENCER are delighted when their daughter, QUINN (28), announces her engagement to newly-introduced NIC (28)… until they hear the name of their future son-in-law’s father. Thanksgiving dinner hits the skids, and Ellen doesn’t know whether to scream or cry when she realizes Nic’s father, DOMINIC (58), is her obnoxious, two-timing ex-husband. After 32 glorious years of no contact, distraught Ellen is convinced he’ll ruin the much-anticipated wedding—and quite possibly her life. Ellen’s father, BERT (77), figures out this twist the night before and can’t wait to witness the pandemonium once she does. He’s thrilled with the unthinkable curveball since his relationship with like-minded Dominic before the divorce had been chummy. It’s far different than the contemptuous relationship he has with reserved Neil, a polar opposite academic who's desperate to finesse the dicey circumstances and maintain decorum. Bert is an unfiltered instigator. When his cheeky grandson turns 16, Bert takes him to Dominic’s huge car dealership—stoking the home fire, but it’s only the beginning. Ellen’s saucy (but lonely) best friend of 20 years, MARIANA (52), vows to help her through this madness. When Ellen laments she can’t find a recent photo of “the bastard” online, Mariana suggests they take a day trip to his dealership, in tawdry disguises, in a misguided ploy to satisfy Ellen’s curiosity and her own. But that visit lights a different fire. Quinn longs for a peaceful wedding and advocates eloping to prevent a spectacle, or worse, a crime scene, but sentimental Nic adamantly refuses. When wealthy Dominic hosts an engagement party at his opulent home, his ego, charm—and bawdiness—are on full display, mortifying Nic. Ellen rightfully dreads the extravagant shindig and finds herself both aghast and riled up throughout. The obvious sexual energy between Mariana and Dominic only heightens her distress. The drama becomes too much for rattled Quinn, who questions the wisdom of marrying Nic and returns the ring, crushing him (and Ellen). Emboldened by liquor, Ellen confronts Dominic mid-party. It’s Neil who comes through by talking Quinn down. Just when Ellen thinks it can't get any worse, she catches Mariana and Dominic in a steamy lip lock. A fun, romantic getaway only seals their bond. Convinced Dominic will hurt Mariana too, Ellen unravels. During Quinn’s bridal shower, Ellen discovers Dominic in Mariana’s kitchen and, to Quinn’s horror, their unresolved conflicts come to a fiery head—captivating astonished guests. By now it’s blatantly clear that Ellen and Dominic were a total mismatch. (Just ask Bert!) Once raw emotions are overt, Ellen ultimately makes peace with her past and extends a symbolic olive branch to Dominic. She also recognizes that Mariana and the “new and improved” Dominic truly are good for one another and is genuinely happy for her best friend. Despite complicated dynamics, as the story progresses, the characters’ evolving mindsets allow for Quinn and Nic’s lavish wedding at the end to feel celebratory and joyful. Brouhaha averted, Ellen’s surprise move at the reception signals a heartfelt and harmonious new beginning.
All Accolades & Coverage

Quarterfinalist - 2024 Creative Screenwriting Unique Voices Screenplay Competition
Quarterfinalist - 2023 Filmmatic Comedy Screenplay Awards (Season 8)
Quarterfinalist - 2023 Creative Screenwriting Feature Screenplay Competition
Quarterfinalist - 2023 Emerging Screenwriters Genre Screenplay Competition
Second Rounder - 2022 Austin Film Festival Screenplay Competition
Quarterfinalist - 2021 StoryPros International Screenplay Contest
Quarterfinalist - 2021 Chicago Screenplay Awards
"Double Recommend" Stage 32 (Industry Reader) - November 2020
Quarterfinalist - 2020 ScreenCraft Comedy Contest
Quarterfinalist - 2020 Emerging Screenwriters Genre Screenplay Competition
Honorable Mention - 2020 WriteMovies Summer Screenwriting Contest
Honorable Mention - 2020 WriteMovies Romance and Comedy Award

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The Writer: Andrea Zastrow

Greetings from Wausau, Wisconsin! Raised in Iowa, I continue to embrace Midwest sensibilities. I write grounded, character-driven stories with heart—mostly drama and comedy with a dash of Midwest flavor. (Locations are flexible.) My scripts find the emotional story, exploring themes of loss, atonement, estrangement and regret along with love, hope, forgiveness and new beginnings. An upbeat, collaborative spirit, I cowrote a Christmas script with David Congalton (screenwriter of AUTHORS ANONYMOUS, 2014) after connecting on this platform. We communicated entirely via email. Maybe someday we’ll actually meet! I find fulfillment in being part of an artistic team. I was the Script Supervisor for… Go to bio
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