Wanting a solitary vigil at his dying mother's bedside, a man finds a pesky spectral winged insect threatening to make the whole situation laughable.
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
7pp
Genre:
Comedy
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
A son wants to undertake a solitary, solemn wake at his dying mother’s bedside, her lying here unconscious on life-support in a bedroom. He wonders how to wile his time. An exotic fly comes to take up all his attention. He tries to swat it with a newspaper - to no avail. He stands on a chair, to reach the winged insect. He topples, bangs his head, nearly fatally. He tries to trap it under a tumbler. The glass smashes, cutting his wrist – causing him to bleed profusely. He ties a tourniquet. When the mother’s monitor indicates flatlining and termination of her life, he sees the fly crawling on back of her hand. He makes to swat it this time for sure. But then he stops, reflects, relents; opens the window, ushers the fly out.

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The Writer: Barry Staff

In parallel with an oddball 'career' in McJobs (roof-rack assembler, computer helpdesk, beer bottler, reject furniture salesman, draughtsman, goods-inward operative, a bouncer - briefly. . .) Barry has written a portfolio of feature screenplays, associated shorts, and spinoffs. With multiple laurels for the screenplays and four of the shorts filmed, helmed by himself, he's, SO FAR, had a purchase offer on one feature script, an option on another and a shopping agreement on a third, and a long-form series shortlisted by Channel 4 Latest news: Winner - Kingston International Film Festival (Script to Screen Award): 'Mashup' Winner - Paperscreenplay Contest (Best Concept): 'Soundbite' Winner -… Go to bio
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