This is EP 9 of my original series - The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy, which is my take on shows like Black Mirror and The Twilight Zone.
I wanted to challenge myself by not using any dialogue at all. I read the Quiet Place to get inspired a little, but I soon realized how difficult it is to tell a story without dialogue. Instead of just using groans and grunts, which I originally intended, I made up a language for the minimal dialogue in this screenplay.
There is some regular dialogue in the VISION scenes, but the majority of the screenplay contains very little dialogue. I also watched Apocalypto to gain some inspiration.
This was one of the early ideas I had for this series.
I originally wanted to recreate the caveman scenes from 2001 A Space Odyssey. I thought it would be cool to just expand on that short scene and build on those themes.
Other notes ---
As I began to outline this story, it became more influenced by movies like Planet of the Apes.
The themes of this episode connect to the overall mood and voice of this entire series. This is also the first episode that really incorporates the Black Mirror type of universal connection. A lot of characters and symbolism in this episode come directly from other episodes in this series.
Although this series is not connected by episodes, there is going to be some overlapping characters, themes and plot lines. I am discovering while I write each episode that maybe the entire first season is heading somewhere. Something major to tie everything together somehow.
You can still enjoy and understand the story even if you did not read any of the other episodes.
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The Writer: Raymond Giuffrida
I am a screenwriter and songwriter. I've been working over the last few years on my series idea - The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy, which is my take on shows like The Twilight Zone and Black Mirror. I have 12 episodes written for season one and many ideas for future episodes. Each episode features new characters/settings, although some episodes continue previous storylines. Also have three feature-length screenplays ready to be produced. Go to bioMore Scripts From Raymond
Everything is Free
A young dreamer from the country heads to the city to pursue her career in music, but discovers there is much more to the music business than just writing songs. Set in 1960's Greenwich Village.
Feature Drama, Horror, Music For sale 73pp
Elegant Eccentrics
A son is forced to reconnect with his eccentric father who loses all his money on internet poker and is kicked out of his nursing home.
Feature Adventure, Comedy, Drama For sale 106pp
Seeds of Anarchy
Three city punks flee to the southern USA to escape mob retaliation.
Feature Comedy For sale 103pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 12 - Garrity
A popular political talking head struggles to make sense of the modern digital world around him.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Thriller For sale 58pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 11 - Rebels
A soccer coach reconnects with his soccer team after the tragic death of his son, and now must battle demons both literally and metaphorically.
Episode Drama, Horror, Mystery For sale 78pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 10 - Rinse and Repeat PT II
A homeless man struggles against both political and societal forces in his attempt to build a congregation comprised of drunks, vagrants and addicts.
Episode Comedy, Drama For sale 71pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 8 - Once in a Lifetime
Todd searches for meaning and truth on his birthday but struggles to maintain control over his reality and overall sanity.
Episode Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Thriller For sale 50pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 7 - Marathon
After experiencing a string of bad luck since High School, Joe tries to reclaim his glory days by competing in marathons, leading to the 1984 Olympic marathon in Los Angeles.
Episode Comedy, Drama, Sport For sale 58pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 6 - The Wraith's Refrain Part II
A trapped, tortured soul falls in love with a music teacher with aspirations of becoming a composer.
Episode Drama, Horror, Romance For sale 48pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 5 - The Wraith's Refrain - Part I
A cursed lake in Scotland features a long history of witchcraft and other preternatural events.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Horror For sale 48pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 4 - Man & Deer
A man going through a mid-life crisis must fight his gambling addiction and other demons with the help of his new deer companion. Animation set in Atlantic City.
Episode Animation, Comedy, Fantasy, Music For sale 53pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 3 - Jailbreak
A children's game of Jailbreak on a summer night in the American suburbs soon turns into a much more horrifying game.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Horror For sale 50pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 2 - Expanding Universe
A former musical prodigy must find peace in her senior years, after a tragic car accident kills her son.
Episode Drama, Fantasy, Sci-Fi For sale 44pp
The Madman's Daily Unequivocal Comedy - EP 1 - The Last Prisoner
Three prisoners try to survive together after their transport is attacked by Native Americans. Set in a Frontier town in Arizona in the late 1800s.
Episode Adventure, Drama, Western For sale 47pp