
Synopsis/Details
All Accolades & Coverage
2nd Place Action/Adventure, StoryPros Awards Screenplay Contest 2018
Silver Medal, Screenplay, Depth of Field International Film Festival 2018
Honourable Mention, London Film Awards 2018
Quarterfinalist, Scriptapaloza 2018
Nominated For Best Blockbuster, 2018 Oaxaca FilmFest
WINNER, Best Poster Art at the Alternative Film Fest 2019
OFFICIAL SELECTION, American Screenwriters Conference 2019
SEMI-FINALIST, Rhode Island International Film Festival 2019
Coverage Notes:
OPENING THOUGHTS:
I can honestly say that I don’t think I’ve ever read a script as unique and “out there” as this one - I mean this as a compliment. Along with the unique world, the characters and overall plot seem to really work well throughout.
CHARACTERS:
First off, you need to know that all your characters were very well developed. Every character seemed to have a nice character arc, specific goals to achieve and interesting traits to keep the readers invested.
PLOT:
It was definitely interesting, to say the least. It went all over the map and back as it touched upon adventure/sci- fi/comedy/western. It truly felt like an Indiana Jones story but with a unique tone and twist on it.
STRUCTURE:
Structurally the script was perfect. You had a very obvious inciting incident, turning points, midpoint, and climax.
DIALOGUE:
Brilliant! At no point did I feel the dialogue marched in place, was on-the-nose or expositional. Every time someone spoke it either pushed the story forward or expanded on their character - great job.
CONCEPT:
Obviously, this is a high concept script as it’s every genre jammed into one. I do think this is a very sellable feature for young and old audiences alike should there be the financial backing to get this off the ground.
OVERALL: RECOMMEND
Unique, strange, fun, funny and entertaining - you can’t go wrong with that. Congrats on a fantastic draft and I hope to see this on the big screen at some point.