Tornado Rider Rhodes by stevie T | Script Revolution

Tornado Rider Rhodes

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Save the world from Nazis and ninjas, all in a days work for this larger-than-life globetrotting cargo pilot, but when they target her hometown the gloves come off and all hell breaks loose.
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The legend begins in the cornfields of Indiana 1908, a tornado rips through a small town and carries off an infant child. The child is discovered two days later unscathed in a field, adopted by the entire community and re-christen Tornado Rider Rhodes.

The story then catapults to the skies over Mainland China circa 1938 where war with the Japanese brews and we find Tornado Rider Rhodes piloting a cargo plane along with her trusty sidekick and co-pilot Whiskey Callahan as their flight is interrupted by stowaway Japanese soldiers bent on hijacking the plane and diverting a weapons shipment. Soldiers subdued, the cargo and now prisoners are re-routed to some friends at the gateway to Tibet. It is here that Rhodes reconnects with a spiritual master and learns of her destiny to battle evil and save the world.

An ex-boyfriend complicates matters when he inadvertently makes Rhodes’ hometown the focus of attention for some nefarious individuals which propels her into an action-packed adventure involving an heirloom samurai sword and a newly unearthed flying saucer as Rhodes and crew are chased out of China by ninjas and into Canada trying to deliver a human cargo who holds the key to unlocking an ancient mystery. It is here that they come across menacing adversaries and a Nazi plot to win World War II before it starts by effectively locking the US out of any impending conflict. Yet all of that is secondary when it comes to protecting her hometown and, by virtue of, her extended family.

Many obstacles lie in their path and are overcome with spectacular cinematic set pieces that interweave organically throughout the narrative as our reluctant hero, Rhodes, does whatever it takes to attain her goal of retrieving a sword misappropriated in transit because, destiny be damned, she’s got a shipping manifest to rectify, not to mention, a town to save. After all, even with all the buckle swashing, this is ultimately a story about delivery personnel, a small town girl with deep roots, and a hometown worth fighting to save.

The tenor creates a synergy between serious action and witty situational dialogue delivered through infectious banter which creates effortless humor against daredevil exploits in this highly polished character driven tale that deftly employs subversion and reinvention of tropes and clichés to keep the story fresh and contemporary without corrupting its period sensibility and all the while deconstructing the dogma of the institutionalized motion picture hero myth.

All Accolades & Coverage: 

2nd Place Action/Adventure StoryPros Awards Screenplay Contest 2018

Nominated For Best Blockbuster at 2018 Oaxaca FilmFest

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OPENING THOUGHTS:
I can honestly say that I don’t think I’ve ever read a script as unique and “out there” as this one - I mean this as a compliment. Along with the unique world, the characters and overall plot seem to really work well throughout.

CHARACTERS:
First off, you need to know that all your characters were very well developed. Every character seemed to have a nice character arc, specific goals to achieve and interesting traits to keep the readers invested.

PLOT:
It was definitely interesting to say the least. It went all over the map and back as it touched upon adventure/sci- fi/comedy/western. It truly felt like an Indiana Jones story but with a unique tone and twist on it.

STRUCTURE:
Structurally the script was perfect. You had a very obvious inciting incident, turning points, midpoint, and climax.

DIALOGUE:
Brilliant! At no point did I feel the dialogue marched in place, was on-the-nose or expositional. Every time someone spoke it either pushed the story forward or expanded on their character - great job.

CONCEPT:
Obviously, this is a high concept script as it’s every genre jammed into one. I do think this is a very sellable feature for young and old audiences alike should there be the financial backing to get this off the ground.

OVERALL: RECOMMEND
Unique, strange, fun, funny and entertaining - you can’t go wrong with that. Congrats on a fantastic draft and I hope to see this on the big screen at some point.

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The Writer: stevie T

About the Author: He’s an optimistic cynic who sees the glass as half full but somebody probably spit in it that defines himself an artist, writer, and filmmaker. He worked in Hollywood for a number of years in a creative supervisory position at a major before moving on to become a serial entrepreneur working as a marketing genius advisor to or co-founder of several unique startups across a broad spectrum from tech to sustainability to sports. He is also a patent holder. His favorite color is spaghetti and if he had one wish in this world he’d put it in a drawer forget where he left it. Go to bio

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