A man and woman get stuck in an elevator. Slowly they realize who each other is.
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
7pp
Genre:
Mystery, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
I wrote it as a mystery as most of my scripts. But then I rewrote it to be more focused on the tension and thriller aspect of it so I just revealed most clues very early instead. Readers seem to miss most mystery elements when they are in the script and not visual. It's hard to really know what a reader can remember from scene to scene in a script that doesn't show you things very clearly on screen. Locations: Elevator. But also a few exposition scenes outside the elevator that can be moved. Actors: 1 woman, 1 fit man. And a single small side character.

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so. I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get. Info to directors All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my… Go to bio
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