
Synopsis/Details
All Accolades & Coverage
Bluecat and Scriptapalooza Quarter finalist
COVERINK COMMENTS
OVERALL
Moving through the underworld of NYC’s sensual clubs, DEADLY INTENTIONS is a drama that examines human emotions in the wake of sudden death from AIDS. The script presents some strong subject matter, and it carries this weight fairly well without becoming heavy-handed.
While the script shows real potential as a lower budget drama, there are a few issues that are running through the script that detract from the script’s impact. The majority of these issues are minor, yet they culminate toward the end of the script.
BARNSTORM COMMENTS
We enjoyed the relationship you built between Carol and Bryan.
The fact that Carol is an identical twin is an ingenious complication.
It’s clear that you have a solid understand of story and structure.