A man decides to go his own way in life instead of staying at home with his girlfriend. But something is amiss, why is his health getting worse?
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
8pp
Genre:
Mystery, Romance
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
A darker example of my work. I'm not sure what is happening with this script production wise, but I will look into it. I got a review that told me that the characters were flat. So there is that to be aware of. I have been improving it a bit lately. Actors: 1 man, 2 women. Locations: 2 apartments, 1 short cafe scene.

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Submitted: 2019-Jan-14
Last Updated: 2019-Feb-12
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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so. I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get. Info to directors All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my… Go to bio
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