Psychopaths Responsible for the Sizzle, Sizzle

I wrote this script a long time ago before I had even read other scripts or knew how to structure a story. I went through it today as a much better writer and just worked and worked on it until I polished a fast paced story out of it. It was actually pretty hard because these scenes are mostly just people talking to each other. It's based on a ton of crime documentary TV shows I uses to watch about investigations. But I actually had to remove a 1 minute monologue about crime investigations and how they are conducted. It was a bomb of info, but it's just too much exposition. I focused on the plot instead. Locations: A field. A household. A household. Actors: 3 kids. 2 men. 2 women. 1 young girl.