Tar Pits by Don Stroud | Script Revolution

Tar Pits

Forced to take sides in a centuries-old intergalactic war, a veteran soldier and her scientist ex-wife bond with giant alien warriors in a final battle that will decide the fate of humanity.

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Death from the stars lurks deep underground.

Lieutenant Louise Travers sacrificed her marriage for a chance to continue her work in the National Guard, leaving her bitter ex-wife Bala Garlapati to put her paleontology career on hold as she raised their daughter, Aajadi.

But when a cataclysmic earthquake ejects a spaceship from the murky depths of the La Brea Tar Pits in Los Angeles, Bala becomes the mentally-bonded human representative for Ylak, an alien who claims to be the sole survivor of an extraterrestrial genocide.

At the same time, while on a rescue mission in Alaska, Travers confronts Ylaks' enemy, the gelatinous shape-changing Vholu, when it emerges from an exploding volcano. The hideous alien makes physical contact with Travers, creating an unstable mental link that causes her to experience Vholu's memories of interstellar war.

In less than a week, Ylak becomes worshipped as a God-sent savior by millions of terrified Americans who have been forced to accept that humanity is no longer alone in the universe, and now believe that only Ylak can prevent Vholu from enslaving the entire planet.

As Vholu battles its way towards Los Angeles through the American Armed Forces now under Ylak's command, Travers begins to sense that something isn't right... that Bala's proselytizing of Ylak's benevolence is disguising a darker agenda.

It isn't until a mortally-wounded Travers is reunited with Vholu that the truth is revealed, turning downtown Los Angeles into an arena for the final battle between the two estranged women and the their alien partners, the freedom of humanity hanging in the balance.

All Accolades & Coverage: 

2024 B!tchfest Film Festival & Screenplay Contest - OFFICIAL SELECTION
2023 Los Angeles Int'l Sci-Fi Film Festival - Best Feature Screenplay - FINALIST
2022 LA Sci-Fi Film & Media Festival - Europa Gold Award: Best Unproduced Sci-Fi Screenplay - WINNER
2022 Multi Dimension Independent Film Festival - Best Unproduced Screenplay - FINALIST
2022 Geneva Int'l Science In Fiction Screenplay Awards - FINALIST

Submitted: April 17, 2022
Last Updated: October 30, 2024

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The Writer: Don Stroud

Hailing from the wilds of North Carolina, I spent my formative years making my own comic books and toys. After a lengthy career in the software industry, I decided to dust off my artistic dreams and get back to creating. I became an editor in Hollywood, working on low-budget horror movies and award-winning documentaries. But after time spent playing with other peoples' toys, I decided to craft my own, and transfer the stories in my head to the written page. Over the last several years I have dedicated my energies towards screenwriting, producing some award-winning original screenplays in the process. My goal is to sit in a darkened theater and see my work up on the big screen. Go to bio

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