The Enemy Within by Jurij Fedorov | Script Revolution

The Enemy Within

A man wakes up with a bit of sand in his mouth. How did it get there?

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I was reading an old script and cringing all the way through it. When I write complicated stuff I place a lot of exposition in the dialogue and simplify it so that readers can get the story. But this often leaves me with very on the nose dialogue. I knew I couldn't really work on old stuff right now so it has to wait. Instead I wrote something simple with minimum dialogue so that it could never make me cringe as I would never need to fix any dialogue.

There is a really cheap way to make this movie. So you can do it for no budget. But there is one scene that may need some creative thinking. Basically, it's such a simple story that you can play around with the scenes and actors here.

Actors: Mostly 1. A few other people are shortly there too.

Location: Regular office. Inside and outside an apartment or house.

Submitted: January 20, 2019
Last Updated: January 21, 2019

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so. I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get. Info to directors All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my... Go to bio

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