Unplanned by Jurij Fedorov | Script Revolution

Unplanned

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"EENY, MEENY, MINY, MOE" a screenplay I read yesterday on this site.
Logline: 
2 men in a doctor's waiting room. They have an experience in common.
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This project is very easy to film.

Yeah, it's heavily inspired by EENY, MEENY, MINY, MOE which I actually liked a lot. It was a simple and short story. I read it yesterday and felt like there could be a bit more conflict in the story. I reused the premise but wrote a new story. In my script everything is happening in 1 room and with only 2 actors. I could write it simple, so I did. I always try to make things cheap to film.

https://www.scriptrevolution.com/scripts/eeny-meeny-miny-moe

This is from my "write a script a day" challenge. This one I was a bit lazy on because I spent a lot of time today not working on it. On the other hand the story is so simple that there is not really much to work on. If I have to change and improve it much from now on I will have to add actors and length to it. But maybe fewer directors would want to make it if more actors are required for the project.

I'm not really sure the heavy dialogue works. There is not much action here because the story needs to be told via dialogue. So they just have to keep talking. But I can always try to write less dialogue in my next short film.

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

I use this site to upload all my completed screenplays and some screenplays that can use another draft. All my features are incomplete but just read my scrip descriptions to see if I think the script is complete or not.

I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots!

 

Info to directors

All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my screenplays. You can of course adapt it to your locations and actors or I can help you with that too. I also write short films for fun all... Go to bio

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