Unplanned by Jurij Fedorov | Script Revolution

Unplanned

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"EENY, MEENY, MINY, MOE" a screenplay I read yesterday on this site.
Logline: 
2 men in a doctor's waiting room. They have an experience in common.
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This project is very easy to film.

Yeah, it's heavily inspired by EENY, MEENY, MINY, MOE which I actually liked a lot. It was a simple and short story. I read it yesterday and felt like there could be a bit more conflict in the story. I reused the premise but wrote a new story. In my script everything is happening in 1 room and with only 2 actors. I could write it simple, so I did. I always try to make things cheap to film.

https://www.scriptrevolution.com/scripts/eeny-meeny-miny-moe

This is from my "write a script a day" challenge. This one I was a bit lazy on because I spent a lot of time today not working on it. On the other hand the story is so simple that there is not really much to work on. If I have to change and improve it much from now on I will have to add actors and length to it. But maybe fewer directors would want to make it if more actors are required for the project.

I'm not really sure the heavy dialogue works. There is not much action here because the story needs to be told via dialogue. So they just have to keep talking. But I can always try to write less dialogue in my next short film.

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so.

I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get.

 

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