Wanting a solitary game of Cluedo, a woman instead suffers a deadly game with an intruder in the house. But another woman seems to be coming to her rescue. But nothing's as it seems.
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
9pp
Genre:
Thriller
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
(Mostly contained - with 3 characters) On the stroke of midnight, a woman alone in a bedroom opens a present with 10 red kisses drawn on the wrapping. She touches across the miniature murder weapons of the Cluedo board-game gift inside. But she’s suddenly fearful, at hearing sounds of an intruder somehow gotten indoors. But another female, in running gear, who seems to have sussed the danger, sets off along the streets, to come to the rescue. As a deadly game of cat and mouse unfolds indoors, a bit of lead pipe, a length of rope and a dagger used as weaponry, ambiguous psych-out smartphone exchanges are passed between the man and the two women. But the murderous situation turns out to be an elaborate ploy by the couple indoors to keep their love excitingly alive on this the 10th anniversary of their relationship. And the supposed rescuer? She turns out to be a friend who knows of the game, and she jogs past their window, smiling to see the couple drop their weapons, entwine and kiss. (Alternative ending: the knife is used to stab the man, and the woman runs off with the jogger girlfriend.)

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The Writer: Barry Staff

In parallel with an oddball 'career' in McJobs (roof-rack assembler, computer helpdesk, beer bottler, reject furniture salesman, draughtsman, goods-inward operative, a bouncer - briefly. . .) Barry has written a portfolio of feature screenplays, associated shorts, and spinoffs. With multiple laurels for the screenplays and four of the shorts filmed, helmed by himself, he's, SO FAR, had a purchase offer on one feature script, an option on another and a shopping agreement on a third, and a long-form series shortlisted by Channel 4 Latest news: Winner - Kingston International Film Festival (Script to Screen Award): 'Mashup' Winner - Paperscreenplay Contest (Best Concept): 'Soundbite' Winner -… Go to bio
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