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TITLE: Last Train Home (aka Reunion )
AUTHOR: Art D’Alessandro
READ BY/DATE: Andrew Hess
FORM/PAGES: Screenplay/105 Pages
GENRE: Redemption
BUDGET: Low - medium
CIRCA: Present -1970’s
LOCALE: Bethel, Florida
LOGLINE: A convict is sent back in time to change himself. A story of redemption, with a hint of hope.
SUMMARY: A man on Death row has just been electrocuted, though he has not yet died. His pulse "still" pounding, and with the clock ticking, we follow Robert who is given the chance to change his fate by going back into his past. He is given three days, until the Fourth of July by a mysterious man named John, who acts as his guide throughout the journey. He sends Robert back in time to his old hometown, where he is reunited with all his loved ones that he’s lost, but must not let on to who he is. He meets his younger self, Bobby and tries to talk him (self) into straightening out his life before it’s too late. Bobby lost his father to suicide, so at this stage we find him full of anger, hate and mistrust. Bobby and his two friends, Jason, the little guy who always follows orders, and Luke, the bully of the three, plot to rob the town’s bank on the fourth of July. Robert stays with Sue, mother to Sarah, who is Bobby’s girlfriend. Robert meets all of the locals that he’s come to remember, the local sheriff, Farmers, etc. When the night of the robbery arrives, Robert must find a way to convince Bobby that this path he’s on will only lead to destruction. At a pivotal point Bobby is faced with a choice and makes the right one, while Robert is left holding the bag for his former self and is carted off to jail. When it seems as though Robert will miss his chance to return under the 3-day limit, John, in disguise, as he is frequently throughout the story, whisks him away back to our opening. Returning to the scene of the death chamber, they carry the dead body out of the chamber to reveal the arm of not Bobby/Robert, but of Bobby’s bully friend, Luke.
COMMENTS: The opening is strong, it has an easy to follow story and plot. Good concept on meeting and trying to change younger self, interesting way of synchronizing actions. Great twist at the end.
Project Recommendation: Highly recommended! Great story. An international subject matter the audience can identify with in today's life of turmoil!
Writer Recommendation: Recommend: Good writing for hope-filled stories