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'Going Down'

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an impatient businessman gets stuck in his office lift, wanting to go up, but goes down in an unexpected way!
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Bob Walker, rude, impatient, steps into the lift. The doors close but it doesn't move after repeated thumps. He calls assistance via the button, and a voice explains to be patient while re-booting. His rudeness and impatience takes him to the opposite place he wants to go, when demanding the doors open, he finds himself dead on the floor outside.
The door closes on Bob, and he is taken abruptly all the way down!

Submitted: November 14, 2019
Last Updated: November 14, 2019

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The Writer: Tina Balli

Studied at LCCA, creative media, where I wrote 'Spotted Dick, the Musical,' a comedy short, in song! Check it on my YouTube channel, LEMONADE BUDGET, where I also have crafty tutorials.. . I attended a script course with 'Raindance', many years ago...Yes, I''m no spring chicken. . I self published 4 novels, am creator of 'the demon realm' tarot deck and book. all available to buy online. I've studied occult for 40 years, so my writing reflects this. Trust me when I say I have seen and done more supernatural stuff than any movie, and know what I'm talking about! I concentrate more on script writing now, but I am an artist, and occasionally get time to paint or make weird stuff. You can see... Go to bio

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