Judgement at Siddim by Steve Garry | Script Revolution

Judgement at Siddim

A man reassesses his plan to avenge a violent crime against his family after a stranger crosses his path who is set to mete out his own final brand of justice.

Type:

  • Feature

Status:

  • For sale
Page Count: 
104pp

Genre:

  • Crime, Drama, Mystery, Thriller

Budget:

  • Independent

Age Rating:

  • 13+
Synopsis/Details: 

"Siddim" (where Sodom and Gomorrah were located) has influences as diverse as "Shane" and "Virgin Spring", but mainly it's my response to "Taken".

That's why I write some of my stories: As a reaction to what was missing or good about other films. I enjoyed "Taken", but I'm amazed how stupid the bad guys can be in these movies - they hurt somebody's kid or spouse, and that somebody turns out to be an ex-CIA or ex-Green Beret.

You'd think the villains would do their research first!

So, in my story, Sam Toomes is a plain, city tax auditor. He his family live the middle-class dream, until it is devastated by the reckless act of a drug lord's son.

When the corrupt local police do not act, Sam prepares to wreak justice. But he is untrained for such a task, and restrained by his civility.

But then Sam crosses paths with a stranger in town, one with his own interest in and special talents to deal with the gangsters.

As events hurtle toward a cataclysmic yet strangely moral conclusion, should Sam intervene, or stand by? Or should he help the stranger - and lose his soul?

If you'd like to view this noirish, sequel- or cable series-spawning, violent anti-violence "revenge flick with a difference", I look forward to sending it to you. (Also available as Pilot + Episode One)

Producers: Please contact me for the full script/synopsis, or buy the Kindle version at http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007TP1MBU

Submitted: February 23, 2017
Last Updated: December 11, 2021

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The Writer: Steve Garry
I am an incorporated businessperson, and I operate as Integer Entertainment. I'm actively pursuing attachments for my smaller scale projects before I work my way up. While the status of my scripts here may read 'For Sale', I'm just as likely to be seeking producers/talent/investors to collaborate with as a co-producer or EP, wherein I'd be bringing my screenplay as well as package elements and maybe even some money to the table. In addition, with a decade of pitching behind me and being read hundreds of times, I may have connections to enhance the resources that you have available. Don't hesitate to approach me with this in mind. Flexibility, creativity and unconventional collaborations are... Go to bio

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