Script Feedback by Jurij Fedorov | Script Revolution

Script Feedback

A guy receives feedback on his script.

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Well, it's just about feedback. This is how it feels to give feedback to most writers.

Locations: A room.

Actors: 2 actors.

Submitted: February 25, 2019
Last Updated: February 25, 2019

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so. I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get. Info to directors All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my... Go to bio

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