A young man’s obsession with love, sex, and control spirals into self-destruction as he grapples with the haunting question: What is a man’s purpose when he loses the only woman who ever truly saw him?
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
5pp
Genre:
Drama
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details
The Story Act 1: The Illusion of Love Josh, a young mechanic in his early twenties, is a man consumed by the fairy tale of love. He believes in the myth of completion—that a woman will fill the void in his life, validate his existence, and make him whole. His relationship with his girlfriend is intense, passionate, and all-consuming. He showers her with gifts, plans a future together, and convinces himself that her physical affection is proof of her love. But beneath the surface, Josh’s obsession is less about love and more about possession. He equates her warmth with devotion, her smiles with loyalty, and her touch with eternal commitment. He ignores the cracks in their relationship, drowning his doubts in the fleeting highs of intimacy and the illusion of control. Act 2: The Unraveling As the relationship sours, Josh’s insecurities fester. He begins to question her love, her loyalty, and his own worth. The more he clings, the more she pulls away. His attempts to “fix” things—cutting her off, manipulating her emotions, and using sex as a bandage—only push her further from his grasp. In a moment of brutal self-reflection, Josh realizes the truth: She loved him for who he was, not for what he could provide. But by then, it’s too late. His pride, his ego, and his inability to love selflessly have poisoned everything. She leaves, and Josh is left alone in the hollow echo of his own making. Act 3: The Descent Haunted by regret and self-loathing, Josh spirals. He replays their relationship in his mind, torturing himself with the moments he took for granted. He blames her, then himself, then the world. His garage, once a sanctuary, becomes a tomb for his shattered ego. In a final, desperate act of self-punishment, Josh confronts the ultimate question: What is a man’s purpose? The answer comes too late. His obsession with control, his inability to love without conditions, and his refusal to see the woman who truly loved him for who she was—flaws and all—lead him to a tragic, irreversible choice.

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The Writer: Bernard Mersier

Born and raised in Detroit, Michigan. Some of my work that's been produced include two stage plays. "The same woman in me." "Family abuse" which is also part of an anthology I've written titled "Mirrors with no images." The feature film I have in production is titled "The heartbreaker.” Go to bio
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