After a murdered girl’s body is discovered, black water erupts from the ravine, hunting those who stayed silent. Marked by the curse, a detective must stop her vengeful spirit before the town drowns.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
96pp
Genre:
Action, Horror
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
In the remote town of Black Hollow, a web of silence and superstition unravels when the body of a sixteen-year-old girl, Laurie Hollish, is discovered in a shallow creek at the bottom of a wooded ravine. Detective Ray Mallory, a sharp-eyed and weary investigator, is drawn into the case after a jittery local, Shane, reports the find. As Mallory and his gruff partner, Jim Ferris, begin their inquiry, they uncover a disturbing pattern: Laurie's death isn't just a murder—it's the catalyst for a supernatural force that manifests through the town's water systems, turning taps and streams into conduits of terror. The horror escalates when teenagers like Kyle, a haunted high school student, experience vivid and violent encounters with black, oily water that seems alive, clawing at them in showers and drains. Kyle's friend Sheri stands by him, navigating the town's unspoken code of loyalty that forbids "ratting" on one another. This creed of silence, deeply ingrained in Black Hollow's culture, feeds the entity, allowing it to spread from the ravine through pipes and puddles, marking victims with a distinctive hooked crescent symbol. Mallory is plagued by nightmares and a growing physical mark on his wrist, suggesting a personal connection to the force, while Ferris remains the voice of skepticism, pushing for rational explanations amid the chaos. As the black water invades everyday life—turning school water fountains into traps, hospital IV lines into weapons, and even the rain into a deadly deluge—the town descends into panic. Authorities, including Mayor Colson, deny the supernatural elements, attributing events to contamination or pranks, but their silence only strengthens the entity. Key figures like a water authority engineer, Rita, provide crucial insights into the water's unnatural behavior, revealing how it defies physics by moving against gravity and targeting specific individuals. The story builds tension through a series of attacks that claim lives, including members of a "witness circle" who saw Laurie's body and kept quiet, now being hunted down one by one. Mallory's investigation uncovers Laurie's journals, hinting at a ritual she performed, binding her spirit to the water through the town's culture of secrecy. This revelation forces Mallory to confront his own role in perpetuating silence, as the entity grows more powerful, culminating in a town-wide assault that destroys public spaces and claims more victims. In a desperate bid to end the terror, Mallory, Ferris, Rita, Kyle, and Sheri venture back to the ravine, armed with salt and sugar to disrupt the force. The climax is a harrowing confrontation where Mallory uses his cursed mark to battle Laurie's apparition, breaking the cycle of silence and witnessing. The resolution brings a fragile calm, with the water returning to normal, but subtle hints suggest the threat may linger, leaving the survivors to grapple with the psychological scars and the cost of their silence. The narrative explores themes of guilt, community denial, and the consequences of unspoken truths, blending psychological horror with supernatural elements to create a gripping tale of terror and redemption.
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The Writer: Gary Rose

I’m an optioned screenwriter who, in a previous life, served as a police detective, mastering the delicate art of negotiating hostage situations. Retirement led me down a different path—teaching and writing—a journey that began with my first non-fiction book, which became an Amazon best-seller. That success ignited my passion for storytelling and introduced the world to my indomitable protagonist, FBI agent Jeannie Loomis. Believing that the ends justify the means, Jeannie has become the heart of a gripping 16-novel thriller series. My historical fiction script The Beautiful Beast was selected as a quarter-finalist in the 2025 PAGE competition. The Phantom Train script was selected in 2024… Go to bio
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