School Hallways

One of my first scripts was about school hallways and a chase there. Then some time ago a director asked me to write him a script and I resused the idea but as I tried to combine too many ideas I felt like that script was not focused enough. This is why I wanted to sit down and just write something with that concept that worked. This is pretty much an excuse to teach readers a bunch of psychology in a fun way. So let's see if I succeeded or not. The story could be longer. There is a ton of good details about how the brain works but it may be a big technical at times too. Draft 2: I felt like this script needed some direction somewhere. It was just a plot but it lacked a bit theme if I left it without an ending. So I added 3 more pages and I think it's a much stronger script now. I'm still not sure what this is or if some director somewhere will see something great in it. But it's a tight and fast paced story with few actors and only a few locations.