Concentric

Having stolen a briefcase full of cash, a young couple find themselves trapped in a hotel room with a device which triggers "time loops". Escaping requires they discover how, why... and settle their differences, too.

Type:

Feature

Status:

For sale

Page Count:

85pp

Genre:

Drama, Sci-Fi

Budget:

Shoestring

Age Rating:

13+

Copyright Details:

Library of Congress, 2020.

Synopsis/Details

Having just stolen a briefcase filled with cash, Zoomers Mark and Hedy step into an existential nightmare when they discover there's something else buried inside the loot: a mysterious device which loops time - but can't be turned off. Trapped in their hotel room, the couple try desperately to figure out what's happening, and who's to blame... But as the clock ticks (in ever shorter bursts which could trap them in limbo forever), the two soon discover their relationship could be the steepest obstacle there is! An almost single location script, Concentric has the hard SF appeal of Primer, and would be a spectacular showcase for whoever embodies the two main roles!

All Accolades & Coverage

PAGE 2021 Quarter Finalist!

Story & Logistics

Cast Size:

Few

Locations:

Couple

Characters

Lead Role Ages:

Female Young Adult, Male Young Adult

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Submitted: 2020-Oct-20

Last Updated: 2023-Apr-25

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The Writer: J.E. Clarke

Known for her unique characters and plots, J.E. Clarke has optioned her feature length horror, " Containment " with Primestar Film Group (director Mike Elliott of Scorpion King 4 attached), her SF feature " Stream " with Purryburry Productions, John Noble of " Fringe " and " Lord of the Rings " attached. Her fantasy/SF " Evergreen " (cowritten for Adam Zeulhke of Zenoscope Productions), is currently in preproduction, along with Entanglement (Director/Cowriter David Manocchio), and international thriller Blood Type (Director/Cowriter Dan Thorens.) Currently seeking representation, Ms. Clarke's portfolio of work is also available at http://www.philclarkejr.com/jec.html. Go to bio

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Concentric

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The Writer: J.E. Clarke

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