A flying saucer carrying a school football team home, makes an unscheduled pit stop on Planet Earth, but their landing spot is not what they think it is.
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
4pp
Genre:
Animation
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
Everyone
Synopsis/Details
A flying saucer speeds across the Solar System. It carries sports coach and twitchy traveller, Alioth, and his exuberant school football team, returning home from winning the county league. Co-Pilot Ymir tells Alioth to get them under control and adds they must stop to check a fault in the hyper-drive. The ship lands in an open-air football ground, but the kids are able to play under the full moon, almost as bright as day. Its magnificence calms Alioth's nerves. The 7-a-side teams draw 1-1 when Ymir announces the hyper-drive is fixed and everyone can board. Alioth heads for the steps with relief, but doesn't imagine in his wildest dreams what happens next. Context: Paul Hutchinson runs a group called 555 Challenge on FB. He sets a weekly challenge of '5's - 5 elements, 5 pages, 5 days. It's marvellous to practice writing on demand to a deadline. If you were wondering about the strange juxtaposition of elements in my story, this is where it comes from. The only thing I have to change is the mandatory dialogue line, which he takes from a published film and hence is copyrighted. In this challenge, we were set the line, "Why so serious?" (JOKER), and for which I substituted, "Ideal." I suggest making this as an animation in our new Covid19 normal. Besides, filming in the Solar System costs an absolute fortune and you can't get the insurance.

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The Writer: Fiona Faith Ross

UPDATED: August 2025 FFR explores themes of family relationships, friendships and misunderstandings in Supernatural Fantasy, Comedy, and Romance genres, and some Supernatural Horror. She draws extensively on myth and ancient cultures. 2024/2025 Feature Scripts: The Bookmark, Joint Project with Sophie Gardiner, Contemporary RomCom Chasing My Dream, Joint Project with Sophie Gardiner, Contemporary RomCom Fiction: As Sapphire Lebesque (on Amazon only) writing Historical Romance and Romantasy Crisis at Christmas, A Regency Romance in 3 parts, released 1 August 2025 Series: Regency Christmas Short Stories A Christmas Betrothal Book 1 A Christmas Invitation Book 2 Series: Romances of The… Go to bio
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