A married man secretly installs his girl friend in the loft, when the wife discovers her they become lovers. Unknown to us they plan her husbands murder.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
103pp
Genre:
Crime, Drama
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details
A LOFT TRIANGLE Fay and Dave, an attractive couple in their mid-thirties, have been married for nine years. They have no children. They have their usual annual argument about where to go on holiday. They decide for the first time to take separate holidays. On holiday Dave has an intense and passionate affair with a young girl called Fatima. He promises her they will be together somehow or other. On his return from holiday, Dave wants to bring Fatima over to him, but where can she stay? Dave decides to convert part of his loft into a small living area. He secretly installs Fatima in the loft. After some time, things start to fall apart, someone has to go. Fatima and Dave plan Fay's murder. Fatima has to commit it. Since returning from holiday, Fay finds herself becoming attracted to women. One of her friends is a lesbian. On the day of the murder, Fay leaves work early due to a head ache. Fay finds Fatima in her bedroom with a knife. Fatima and Fay become lovers. Fay is deeply shocked when she sees the loft. Unknown to us, they plan Dave's murder. At a house party, Fay introduces Dave to Fatima. He is speechless. He wants to know what's going on. Fatima explains they're all lovers. Dave wants to know what the sleeping arrangements are. Fatima explains there will be a threesome that night, Dave can't believe his luck! But during a game of bondage, they suffocate Dave. By an ironic twist of fate, it is Dave who ends up in the loft dead. Immigration officials and police turn up to arrest Fatima for over staying her visa. A plumber also arrives to collect a wrench he left in the loft. He notices Dave's naked dead body, but does he tell the police? No so Dave is dead and Fatima is arrested, and Fay is left in limbo, then the plumber phones.

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The Writer: Geoff Hall

I'am a retired bus driver, H.G.V. driver, and driving instructor. I took up screen writing as a hobby after seeing so many remakes. I brought a screen writing book, and taught myself so to speak. I have now written 23 scripts, 17 features, and 6 shorts. I have had one short made into a film called THE BLUE DOOR. I have made finalist, semi finalist, and quater finalist in screen writing competitions, winning 9 occolades. Go to bio
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