Hyperfocals by Tom Kalaj | Script Revolution

Hyperfocals

A reclusive detective, with the unique ability to traverse space-time by entering photographs, must use his powers to hunt down an elusive serial kidnapper before he strikes again.

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TheBlackList on Hyperfocals:
Right out of the gate, the very idea of a “hyperfocal” is a fascinating original idea unlike anything a mass audience has seen before. The innate ability to travel inside a polaroid photograph feels like a truly imaginative concept that would immediately grab viewers from a trailer alone. The fact that this very premise is also the “way in” to a noir detective series only elevates the commerciality of the material here - a fresh twist to the police procedural genre that has grown increasingly tired in recent years. Blessed with this ability that he earned from the darkest day of his life, Detective Evan Carter uses his “hyperfocal” skillsets to give him a leg up in his police work; in other words, he uses his power to save others, an admirable pursuit that makes mass audiences immediately find him sympathetic as a near superhero. And if the cliffhanger of the series ahead has a lot more secrets at play.

Submitted: May 19, 2021
Last Updated: September 8, 2021

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